在我每一次写作文写得不好时，她总是耐心的帮我找出不足之处并叫我改正的翻译：Every time I when writing a poorly written, she always helped me to identify shortcomings and called me to correct 什么意思？中文翻译英文，英文翻译中文，怎么说？

青云英语翻译

Every time I write the text well written, and she patiently helped me to identify shortcomings and she asked me to correct

Every time I when writing a poorly written, she always helped me to identify shortcomings and called me to correct

Each time writes when me the thesis writes not not well, she always patient helps me to discover the deficiency and to call me to correct

Every time I write a poorly written, she was always patient, help me to find out and call me in the correct

Every time I when writing a poorly written, she always helped me to identify shortcomings and called me to correct