一方面我国传统内控模式过于陈旧的翻译：While traditional internal control model is too old 什么意思？中文翻译英文，英文翻译中文，怎么说？

青云英语翻译

On the one hand the traditional internal control model is too old

While traditional internal control model is too old

On the one hand our country tradition controls from the inside the pattern too to be obsolete

My traditional internal control mode is too old

While traditional internal control model is too old